With the deadline looming I'd greatly appreciate some constructive 'urgent' feedback on my screen design, more so for evaluation purposes at the end of the assignment than major design changes!
The website is aimed at teenagers revising GSCE English (Shakespeare), I'm aware I need to format the layout and include browser chrome etc.
Thanks
6 comments:
Brilliant peice of work, something id find realy hard to do. personaly i wouldn't change a thing. Oh and Happy Birthday!!! hope it was a good one.
Brilliant work, I agree with John and wouldn’t change anything. It is defiantly perfect for your target audience.
Perfect design for your target audience, but would this keep under 50k global size per page? I don't know if you have this as one of your project goals.
We think your site is great (no we're not bias). The background is simple and clear so doesn't hurt your eyes, as some sites do! You could possibly look to make your name and course/college stand apart more e.g. by having them on seperate lines. Otherwise the site is easy to navigate around - a key consideration of a sticky website. CJ wants you to put a picture of Stratford on there because it reminds him of when he was young and apparently it has something to do with Willy Shakespeare.
Your design is really good, well done. Personally I would leave it how it is as I think you have taken your audience in to consideration.
I have to agree with all the comments (apart from the whole 'Stratford' thing haha).
You must have put some real thought into this.
I particularly like the pen lined sketch you have done.
Suzanne made a very valid point about the page size. However, I am sure it would be worth the extra few seconds for the page to load.
:-)
Well done.
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