Wednesday 23 April 2008

Business card feedback please

I just created a few business card designs and some feedback would really help, thanks!

5 comments:

Shaun Bellis said...

NUMBER 4!

I know that is not much 'feedback' but number 4 is perfect; it stands out and looks really professional. The hard right aligned text looks fantastic and there is plenty of space for the 'new starter' that has a ridiculously long name!

If it was my company I would be over the moon with the both the logo and the business card idea (#4).

Great Work!

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Shaun Bellis

Tom Smith said...

Number 4 for me thank you very much.

I think the positioning of the logo is better than the the others, and the right aligned text compliments this well.

James Bell said...

I agree number 4 is definitely the one to go for. It looks very very professional with nice alignment and consistant spacing.

It also allows for pople with extremley long names which is essential for business cards.

Mark Torrington said...

This is difficult Michelle.

Although no.4 works some of the other ones would work better. The problem is the conflicting border around your logo. The reason why No.4 work is because you have right aligned the text against the border. I would try working with No.5 without the border and may be introduce a curved solid shape, possibly a quarter of a circle (9 -12’oclock) behind the text.

Gary Benn said...

Number 4!

There is not much that can be said about it because it is so good! I love the way you have fit the logo in! it makes sense to put it there, it fits and it works!

Some of the others im not too sure about. I knbow what you are getting at with the grids but I dont think it works. I think it somewhat takes from the design.

I like the way you have enlarged certain bits of the logo.