Here is a development of my final logo idea. I've spent a lot of time creating each letter from scratch and this is around version #10, so I'd be really grateful for some feedback before I go completely insane!
I'm pretty happy with the outcome and it works well at a variety of different scales and equally as purely black text with no background fill.
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Nice... I like it.
I dont think there is much you can change. Have you experimented much or throught about colour? Or are you planning to do that next week with your style guide?
Have you posted it on the forum yet? I think that would be a good idea, you will get more feedback, especially from the second years. Also you may get feedback from Steve there.
Looks really great and you can really see the development from the original design.
The one thing I would say is that the 'm' seems to dominate the logo due to it being so much wider than the rest so maybe this could be condensed down slightly to match the rest of the letters.
Experimenting with colours is definitely your next step and I can't wait to see the final colour version.
Hi
I think it looks good mainly because its basic standard of black and white, which means it will work on a fax easily, I think though maybe more experimentation may be needed with colour to show how you arrived at your final design of black and white.
The logo its self looks good it stands out and has a lot of weight to it, I think the text is eye luring and draws you in.
Thanks, Martyn
I'm worried about how it will look when small, especially how small we will be having it on the actual CD cover. Also I'm not sure whether it gives off a real strong brand identity, it's abit too busy with alot going on; I saw someone mention (KISS) in another post, I think you should try working by the kiss rules abit more. Especially because proximity wise, there are quite big cut-outs and it doesn't really strongly fit the shape.
I'd even be tempted to use the things you've decorated the E and T with, as your actual logo, then incorporating them in the name in this way for other things.. bringing a better brand identity and a range of uses you can do with that.
Very nice logo there Michelle. I like how you have incorporated emiting waves of sound pulses in to the design of your lettering.
Is this completely self made, or used from the basis of another text.
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